Working on FMP: "Sniping on you"

In process of working on my 10 pattern outcomes...Don't know if i'm doing it right,but oh well,could anything be wrong in this project?

I was thinking about city topic and found stalking topic quite interesting.Every day we are being recorded on thousands of cctv,seen from windows,through eyes;we can be located with our laptops and mobile phones.Pure topic of 1984 Big Brother ahah:) Well,in a couple of hours I managed to make only 4 of them,will see how it goes next...